sailing the fingers of the dragon

Hee. I don't know the fandom, but this is nicely evil. I wasn't sure about the framing device of the debrief, but it was interesting to see that Syd was cleaning up the experience for whoever to read. I think, in the end, that actually enhanced the embarrassment of the whole situation. And, good on you, because although I suppose this is technically non-con, it didn't cross any lines for me because Anna left her with the decision on whether or not to torture (ahem) herself. Does kind of make me wish for the backstory, but for the most part, this stood nicely on its own--I believe in their grudge. Hmm, a missing open-quotation mark here: "Oh no," Anna said. Overall, a fun read.