I have to tell you this: I literally signed on to LJ today thinking "jeez there hasn't been any DCU femslash in a while" and there you are! And I was even more excited when I saw you were the author, because your writing is fantastic, always.
I LOVED this. Your characterization and dialogue choices for all of them was just so right on. It breaks my heart, but I love seeing Scandal hurt for Kay, so I'm glad that's what started all of this.
You know, I've read sone of your stuff before, and something that always gets me is your amazing attention to detail. Like here: Scandal traps her bottom lip between her teeth, looking almost demure until Jeannette sees the flesh whitening with the pressure she's exerting. I was actually subconciously mimcking this effect as I was reading--everything you write I can see so clearly!
I loved your Lawton, too! I really really hope you do more with these guys.
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I LOVED this. Your characterization and dialogue choices for all of them was just so right on. It breaks my heart, but I love seeing Scandal hurt for Kay, so I'm glad that's what started all of this.
You know, I've read sone of your stuff before, and something that always gets me is your amazing attention to detail. Like here:
Scandal traps her bottom lip between her teeth, looking almost demure until Jeannette sees the flesh whitening with the pressure she's exerting.
I was actually subconciously mimcking this effect as I was reading--everything you write I can see so clearly!
I loved your Lawton, too! I really really hope you do more with these guys.
Awesome job on this one!