It was great! I really liked this, especially the subtlety and the tension; there was this great, slightly sinister attraction between them, and it was wonderful and just beneath the surface and Emma was wonderful, aieee. I promised more coherent feedback when I got back, but reading it again makes me all gooey and unable to type properly. ::grins:: Thank you so much for this!!

Kitty can still feel Emma's touch on her arms, uninvited and yet somehow not unwelcome, gentler than she ever expected it to be. Deliberate. Controlled.

::pants:: Mmmmm. Yes. I love Kitty/Emma for just the reason, and you totally nailed it in that part. Yum.

"Kitty, then – if you insist on being diminished,"

I love that, too--it's a great insight into how Emma feels about Kitty.

Really great stuff, here, thanks so much! <3333!!!